College Is A Waste of Time
Pillar 1: Thesis Statement Located : Paragraph 3 "College fails to empower us with the skills necessary to become productive members of today's society. The author uses the Appeal of Pathos, which works great in the opening because it is charged with emotion/passion and attracts the emotional aspect of the audience who will read the essay. At any given point there is a college student that may feel this way and this is a perfect way to grab their attention. Pillar 2: Evidence Located: Paragraph 2-6 Paragraph 2-3: "Our creativity, innovation, and curiosity are schooled out of us. We think of college as a stepping-stone ...College fails to empower us..." Paragraph 4- "College is expensive.The College Board Policy Center found ...